More often

[msaeed]

Hi there' I would like to know is this sentence ccorrection terms of grammar.
first I would like to explain the case.
me and my friends were chilling out last weekend and we had fun
so when we finished and everyone back home.
o sent an SMS to them saying "awesome gathering guys, let's do it more often".

can anyone correct me if there is a grammar mistake.
Regards

[Raymott]

Hi there' I would like to know is this sentence ccorrection terms of grammar.
first I would like to explain the case.
me and my friends were chilling out last weekend and we had fun
so when we finished and everyone back home.
o sent an SMS to them saying "awesome gathering guys, let's do it more often".

can anyone correct me if there is a grammar mistake.
Regards

I'd suggest that you could eliminate half the mistakes by reading it back closely yourself first.
Capitalise the correct words, don't use 'o' for 'I', and don't start 'correction' with two Cs.
Why should we be concerned with your mistakes if you're not?

By the way, your usage of "more often" is correct.

[msaeed]

Sorry for that, I didn't notice about that.
I will review it next time.
Thank you anyhow