Re: I need to rephrase this to a nice and abit simple form for my learning class
Welcome to the forum.
Firstly, you will have noticed that copying and pasting isn't very successul on this forum and there are a lot of spaces missing in your post. Please go back in and edit the post, adding the relevant spaces.
Secondly, we do not do your homework for you. You have stated that you have been given this work for your English class. They want to see what you can do, not what we can do. Therefore, please do the work yourself, submit it to your teacher, and then come back to us after your teacher has seen it. If there are corrections your teacher makes which you don't understand, please feel free to ask us.
Remember - correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing make posts much easier to read.