sorry, Would you help me with title of the article?

Hello

I'm going to do a research on the effect of listening on improving grammatical accuracy as part of writing skill?

Does the following has the same feeling as what I mean? Should I write it differently?

The Impact of Listening to English tapes on the Improvement of Writing Skill.

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Originally Posted by skystar30097

Hello

I'm going to do a research on the effect of listening on improving grammatical accuracy as part of writing skill?

Does the following has the same feeling as what I mean? Should I write it differently?

The Impact of Listening to English tapes on the Improvement of Writing Skill.

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It's quite long though I can't think of a way to shorten it. The only thing I would change would be to use "Recordings" instead of "Tapes". "Tapes" is rather old-fashioned. I doubt many people use audio or video cassettes any more.

Thanks. You are right I haven't paid attention to that.

Although I don't know what the results of you research are, how about "influence" instead of "impact"? I know that "impact" is more marketable, but "influence" might be more appropriate.

charliedeut

PS: if the research proves there is actually an impact, please forget this post.:up:

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Originally Posted by skystar30097

Hello

I'm going to do a research on the effect of listening on improving grammatical accuracy as part of writing skill?

Does the following have the same feeling as what I mean? Should I write it differently?

The Impact of Listening to English tapes on the Improvement of Writing Skill.

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Bhai.

You need to capitalise Tapes in this title.

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Originally Posted by skystar30097

Hello

I'm going to do a research on the effect of listening on improving grammatical accuracy as part of writing skill?

Does the following has the same feeling as what I mean? Should I write it differently?

The Impact of Listening to English tapes on the Improvement of Writing Skill.

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There might be no improvement. I think what you're researching is the influence of listening on grammatical accuracy in writing. You might find that it improves it, or not.
Your sentence reads something like: "The impact of listening on the impact on writing."

Thanks for all your helpful comments.