Is this sentence nativelike?

[skystar30097]

Hi
Would you help me make this sentence more nativelike?

Language as a social phenomenon is always changing under the influence of different
factors among the most important of which are gender, age and education as
social variables.


Thanks

[SoothingDave]

Are "gender, age and education" "different factors" or are they "social variables"? It seems as if you are identifying them twice.

Try writing it as two sentences.

[skystar30097]

Gender, age and education are social factors which affect language.


Language as a social phenomenon is always changing under the influence of different
factors. Gender, age and education as social variables are among the most important factors which affect language.

[SoothingDave]

Gender, age and education are social factors which affect language.


Language as a social phenomenon is always changing under the influence of different
factors. Gender, age and education as social variables are among the most important factors which affect language.

That's better. I still don't know what purpose "as social variables" serves in the sentence. It would read just fine without it.

[skystar30097]

I want to focus that gender, age and education are social variables.
I want to say social variables affect language.
Social variables are among keywords in my research.