recommendatin letter

The following is for a college admission reference letter for a high school student who wants to study fashion. . Please correct any mistakes. Thanks a lot.

XX, has great interest and talent in art. While at high school, she won awards for her paintings and short animation films. She has taken an interior design courses at a private institution after her class in spite of her busy class schedule to be more prepared for her college courses.

***** NOT A TEACHER *****

Susan is a talented young lady with a deep interest in art. In high school, her paintings and short animation films

have earned many awards. Despite her busy class schedule, she is preparing for college by studying interior

design at a private institution.