Proposal report - Introduction

I am writing a proposal report. Is it OK to write: 'The purpose of this proposal is to look at the plans of the swimming pool that is going to be built in the town centre and indicate how it may benefit to the community'?

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Originally Posted by barnej0096

I am writing a proposal report. Is it OK to write: 'The purpose of this proposal is to look at the plans of for the swimming pool that is going to be built in the centre of the town and indicate how it may might benefit to the community'?

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It's OK with my amendments in red.