Is this a good thesis statement?
I wrote it for my essay and I am supposed to be answering the question:How has Jonathan Edwards altered American History and how has he influenced American Literature? Is this a correct, well worded thesis?
"Both a Christian preacher and a theologian, Jonathan Edwards was a vital necessity in shaping the First Great Awakening. The Great Awakening was a crucial part of religion in American History. His many publishments have shaped our Christian religion followed by many today. "