Please help me check the following sentences.
1. For modern teenagers, Online Socializing Platform also has similar allure.
2. It thoroughly overwhelms teenagers’ heart, seizes/occupies their time, and causes them far away from their homes.
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Please help me check the following sentences.
1. For modern teenagers, Online Socializing Platform also has similar allure.
2. It thoroughly overwhelms teenagers’ heart, seizes/occupies their time, and causes them far away from their homes.
I'm afraid that neither sentence has a clear meaning.Quote:
Originally Posted by Ashiuhto
1. For modern teenagers, social media also have a similar allure.
2. It thoroughly overwhelms their hearts, occupies their time, and causes them to run away from their homes.