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Could you please change any mistakes (whether it is grmmar or meaning) in the following sentnece?
When the Korean team beat the opposite team, i got so excited. Therefore, without knowing, i lifed up the water bottle above my head and shook it. the water in the bottle came out and i found a woman in front of me soaked with water. i felt so sorry for her.
the girl soaked with water? 
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