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as I wrote the story
Can one say:
The second sentence is the same in all of them. Only the first one changes.
a. As I wrote the story, it ends with the death of the main character. But when they made a movie based on the book, they changed the ending.
b. The way I wrote the story, it ends with the death of the main character. But when they made a movie based on the book, they changed the ending.
c. The story, as I wrote it, ends with the death of the main character. But when they made a movie based on the book, they changed the ending.
d. As I wrote the story, the main character dies at the end. But when they made a movie based on the book, they changed the ending.
e. In the story, as I wrote it, the main character dies at the end. But when they made a movie based on the book, they changed the ending.
Many Thanks.
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Re: as I wrote the story
You have received a number of good answers to your question here.
If our own members have something to add, they can do so. Otherwise they can save their time.
Rover
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