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- 07-Feb-2006, 13:18 #1
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rephrasing a sentence I would like to rephrase this sentence "Coordinating with the Oasis Dinning Facility for food for the VIP's"
- 07-Feb-2006, 13:18 #2
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- 08-Feb-2006, 02:56 #3
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Teacher Re: rephrasing a sentence Firstly, it isn't a sentence- there's no main verb. If you want to make it a sentence, try:
We collaborate/coordinate with the Oasis Dining Facility to provide food for the VIPs.
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