Hi English Teachers,
Are my sentences acceptable? Thanks a lot in advance.
I asked my father to lend me money for an education. However, after taking into account for years, he has not lent me.
I asked my father to lend me money foraneducation. However,after taking into account for years,after considering the fact that it was going to take four years hehasdid not lend me any.
Does it sound better?
If I were a native speaker of English, I would never shut up.)
Much better.
That's OK.
Rover