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Old 09-Feb-2006, 09:59
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Red face Bad English literary Style (Please help me, teacher)

Please help me. I'm going to make Brochurs and it will print out for 1000 pieces and send to all my target group. Anyone help me to correct my bad English gramma and literary style, please?
Thank you for your kindness. :0)
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carries a small inventory- sounds a bit negative: has a selected range of...
Light and Sound System- systems
meeting- meetings
TV program- TV programs
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Hi tdol

Thank you so much.

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