Please check my essay

[Raiph]

Here is my essay , which is required to be not less than 120 words. If the full mark is 15 , how much can I get?
How to Prevent Burglary
Burglary ranks among the most common crime in the world. Because burglary always happens at midnight , it cannot be easily detected and usually succeeds. Thus it's neccessary for us to prevent burglary, and take precautions.
Personally speaking , above all, make sure you've locked all the windows and doors and don't left them on the latch after you go out or when you go to bed. Unlocked doors and windows are completely vunerable to the burglars. Secondly, put away the valuable things, and never place them here and there, which may bring about burglary.Thirdly, your house should be equiped with some warning alarms attached to the police stations, so that you can keep in touch with the policemen whenever you're in trouble.
In a word, everyone should take precautions and cooperate with the police as much as possible. In this context , we can lead a peaful life.

Appreciate your help!!!
Raiph