Proofread this!

[Ruriko]

Can someone please proofread my rolls&responsibilities document. I need help to make this document longer to fit on one page and If i'm missing any rolls or responsibilites please include them. Here is the document http://www.webpost.net/sh/Shaorin/Roll.doc
Here is the brief outline that the document is based on http://img91.imageshack.us/img91/2029/brief6bu.gif

[Tdol]

All answerable to Nikki.- answerable to Nikki or answerable for all to Nikki, or maybe a different verb, like reporting
Provide expertise that will be showing a demo- I'd just say 'Showing a demo
recoding the audio- recording

If you need to pad it out a bit, include some more info at the top- dates, places, etc.