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[smelvanzq]

To all kind masters please help me correct this paragraph.

What are the benefits from cellphone?
Almost everyone has his cellphone. A beep would make everyone reach and look at his cellphone, but dismayed if the phone that rang is not his.

[Tdol]

his cellphone- a cellphone
his cellphone- I'd use their cellphone
is not his- were/was

[smelvanzq]

his cellphone- a cellphone
his cellphone- I'd use their cellphone
is not his- were/was

Thanks tdol, but I have a question- "everyone" is singular, is'nt it? that's why I used his instead of their.
Pls. correct me if I were wrong.

tnx very much!

[Tdol]

Everyone is singular, but you can use 'their' with it- I always use the plural when the gender is uncertain. Also, though it is grammatically singular, the sense is plural.

[smelvanzq]

Everyone is singular, but you can use 'their' with it- I always use the plural when the gender is uncertain. Also, though it is grammatically singular, the sense is plural.

Tnx teacher! pls check this again

Everyone have their allowance

Tnx teacher so much!

[smelvanzq]

Please help me teacher...pls. pls . pls