please correct this piece of letter

[tatu]

Dear teachers would you please correct this piece of letter?
"During my studing for PhD degree I would like to pay attention to the wide point of view of clinical work(or research?) in neurovascular surgery and
microsurgical aspects of exra-intracranial bypass surgery.
I would be honored to study other aspects of neurovascular surgery from your great experience."
Thank you in advance.

[Tdol]

"During PhD degree I would like to focus on a broad perspecetive of clinical work(or research?- I really don't know whether it's clinical work or research, I'm afraid- how about clinical research?) in neurovascular...

I would be honored to study other aspects of neurovascular surgery from your great experience.
This sounds odd to me- are you just trying to be polite, or do you want him or her to suggest things to study?

[tatu]

Dear tdol,thankyou for your reply.
Yes, i wrote that sentence jast for being polite,but i'll quit it.
I have one more question.How do you say in english studing after PhD degree?
Thanks a lot.

[smelvanzq]

Originally Posted by tatu

Dear tdol,thankyou for your reply.
Yes, i wrote that sentence jast for being polite,but i'll quit it.
I have one more question.How do you say in english studing after PhD degree?
Thanks a lot.

Studing? is'nt it studying?
pls correct me if I were wrong.tnx

[tatu]

yES,YOU'RE RIGHT,BUT CAN YOU ANSWER TO MY QUESTION???

[Tdol]

post-PhD, post-doctorate or doctoral, depending on whetehr you want a noun or an adjective.