Can someone help me correct these sentences please?

[jarnism]

I'm trying to write a resume and this keeps comming up wrong in my word processor.



As an assistant to Joe Shmo, one of the top realtors in Seattle area, gained valuable experience in a business environment working in the real estate industry.

Acted as a liaison between the buyer and the Agent by interpreting between two parties while going step by step towards succesful closing on a property

Created personalized marketing campaign which targeted Russian community currently in the market for Real Estate.

Generated new leads by marketing our services in Russian newspapers, magazines and on the Russian radio station.

[jarnism]

bump, can someone proof read this? It would be much aprpeciated

[Tdol]

The reason is that they aren't complete sentences because the verbs have no subjects- you don't say 'I gained valuable experience', etc. However, in a resume the style you are usig is frequently used. The grammar check is only an approximate guide- just because it highlights something, it doesn't necessarily mean that there is an error.