Is everything OK with these sentences

[vectra]

Hello!
Could you tell me if these sentences are correct?

Different clothes style [/U]helps people to not get in a rut.

One should wear only clothes that he finds convenient.

Many find it advantageous to wear casual clothes instead of uniform.

I would greatly prefer to wear some comfortable casual clothes than a funny-looking uniform. The last one would decrease my appeal to work, would irritate me and so on.

[Tdol]

One should only wear clothes that one finds convenient.
instead of uniform- a
decrease my appeal to work- reduce my desire to work