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Mumbai and Dubai


Urban defined as a city. Many people move from town and rural to urban cities. Urban cities have many facilities such as job, good sanitation, home, water, education etc. In addition, urban cities have many problems which are overpopulation, air pollution, and homelessness etc. People who live in the Dubai and Mumbai which is urban cities face two major problems which are the air pollution, and the homelessness.

People who live in Dubai and Mumbai face the major problem which is air pollution. Air pollution is the presence of any matter or combination of substances in the atmosphere whose physical and chemical characteristics, quantity or location will cause or may cause damages or injury to man, animals or property. Often, only minor changes are needed to pollute the atmosphere. In Dubai there are many cars and factory. As a result, there is air pollution. The air pollution not only effect the people who live on Dubai, but effect the entire world as we take in the global study " we all live downwind". The Dubai municipality tries to protect the environment from the air pollution by rule such as the put fee for the factory that did not use filter, and they require fossil fuels Company to Strive towards ultimate elimination of hydrocarbon flaring. As a result of low cost in Mumbai, most of the businessmen open factory. Moreover, the rate of the overpopulation high .As a result, there are more car and that is second main cause of the air pollution. The Mumbai municipality starts to make plane to reduce the air pollution.

People who live in Dubai and Mumbai face the major important problem which is the homelessness. In Dubai there are many jobs available and less home. As a result, many people work in Dubai, but they did not live there they live in sharja and Ajman and other nearest cities. Furthermore, in Dubai there are many foreign people work there such as servant, and cooker man, and driver more than native people. The solutions that the government of Dubai tries to do are reducing the number of the foreign worker and replace it by local worker. In Mumbai the cause of the homelessness is the overpopulation because women pregnant more than one child and that effect the population. Other cause of the homelessness in Mumbai is the money because in Mumbai there are many poor people who can not built home or can not effort the rent home. The government of the Mumbai makes law to the people who will get married to pregnant one child.

To sum up, urban cities have many facilities such as education, jobs. Although, the urban cities face many problem such as air pollution, and homelessness. The cars and the factories cause the air pollution. Additionally, overpopulation, and the variety of jobs cause homelessness. In my opinion, the government of Dubai, and Mumbai build the factories outside the city I mean the country sides, and make a tax for people who own more than one car.