not only....but also
My today’s last question: Is the following sentence correct by ignoring the inadvertent spelling errors?
The link: http://www.hkedcity.net/ihouse_tools...65693&t=464665
I believe university education will not only provide me with the ncessary academic skills, but also the valuable opportunity to develope my character to the fullest.
Will it be better if I change it like this?
I believe that university education will provide me with not only the necessary academic skills, but also the valuable opportunity to develop my character to the fullest.
Your rewrite is a good one, but I don't think it is necessarily better than the original. It is no worse, but I don't think it is any better either. (Perhaps someone will disagree with me.)
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