grammar

[chuckiea]

hi.. I am new to this site.. so, please accept my apologies if I don't follow protocol, I don't know it yet.

I am typing a brochure and wanted to know if it should read:

1) virtual deposit services are a part of a new electronic network to process checks.

or

2) virtual deposit service is a part of a new electronic network to process checks.

Thanks

Charles

[MrPedantic]

Hello Chuckiea, welcome to UsingEnglish!

I would say:

1. Our Virtual Deposit service is part of a new electronic network for processing checks.

But other members may have other suggestions!

MrP

[chuckiea]

I would have to agree.. thanks

chuckiea