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    danielkramer is offline Junior Member
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    which is correct:

    The possibility that Sprint enters the fixed market has been shuffled since mid-2005. Moreover, rumors on a possible alliance with MCI, the voice and data corporate services operator controlled by Citigroup was also speculated.

    The possibility that Sprint enters the fixed market has been shuffled since mid-2005. Moreover, rumors on a possible alliance with MCI, the voice and data corporate services operator controlled by Citigroup has also been speculated.

    are they both correct?
    thanks
    Daniel

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    Default Re: could someone help me out

    I'd do it this way:

    The possibility of Sprint entering the fixed market has been mooted since mid-2005. Moreover, there have been rumors of a possible alliance with MCI, the voice and data corporate services operator controlled by Citigroup.

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    danielkramer is offline Junior Member
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    Default Re: could someone help me out

    tdol

    thanks again

    Daniel

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