which is correct:
The possibility that Sprint enters the fixed market has been shuffled since mid-2005. Moreover, rumors on a possible alliance with MCI, the voice and data corporate services operator controlled by Citigroup was also speculated.
The possibility that Sprint enters the fixed market has been shuffled since mid-2005. Moreover, rumors on a possible alliance with MCI, the voice and data corporate services operator controlled by Citigroup has also been speculated.
are they both correct?
thanks
Daniel
I'd do it this way:
The possibility of Sprint entering the fixed market has been mooted since mid-2005. Moreover, there have been rumors of a possible alliance with MCI, the voice and data corporate services operator controlled by Citigroup.
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thanks again
Daniel