This is first time I am joining this site. I am Pakistani and work as a Secretary in Dubai. Some times I come across sentences which I feel are not very much suitable and can be better written.
Please correct the following sentences:
1- Kindly furnish us the details asked to enable us finalize the deed.
or Kindly furnish us the details asked enable us to finalize the deed.
2- We thank you for your letter reference xyz/045/06 dated 19/05/2006 for inviting us for the above mentioned project. We hereby confirm our willingness to participate in the same tender.
Thanks,
Fakhar Butt
I'd say 'requested' not 'asked' and it is 'to enable'
2- for inviting- remove 'for'