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06-Jun-2006, 18:43
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 Need some advice on a few sentences, thanks teachers. Please advise if the following is grammatically correct, thanks soooooo much, teachers.   Other than teaching Music, it would be great if I could teach a few Mathematics classes, if accepted for a post at your school. Otherwise, I am still willing to just take up the post of a Music teacher. |
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06-Jun-2006, 20:31
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| Re: Need some advice on a few sentences, thanks teachers. Personally, I would re-arrange the clauses in the first sentence and modify one clause for stylistic reasons (the original does make sense). There are a couple of syntax errors in the second sentence and I don't think the use of proper nouns is justified. "If accepted for a post at your school, in addition to teaching music it would be great if I could teach a few mathematics classes. Otherwise, I am still willing just to take up the post of music teacher." |
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07-Jun-2006, 09:30
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| Re: Need some advice on a few sentences, thanks teachers. Thank you soooo much for your advice, teacher Edmund. |
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