Sorry for wanting help again, teachers! Please advise! Thx

Please amend if there's any mistakes in the following passage, teachers! Thanks heaps!

So I thought if I can be a teacher someday, I will make the lessons more interesting. I will always do some activities in class. If the students are good, I will give them stickers, candies, and sweets. I will play games with them and devise a good method to make them learn their spellings and meanings easily.


Please help, teachers! Thanks a million again! :"(

[RonBee]

Originally Posted by Helped Wanted

So I thought if I can be a teacher someday, I will make the lessons more interesting. I will always do some activities in class. If the students are good, I will give them stickers, candies, and sweets. I will play games with them and devise a good method to make them learn their spellings and meanings easily.(

• When I am a teacher someday, I will make the lessons more interesting. I will always do some activities in class. If the students are good, I will give them stickers, candies, and sweets. I will play games with them and devise a good method to help them learn their spellings and meanings easily.

The original statement was in the nature of a conditional, but I think it is meant more as a predication or statement of determination.

:)

Thanks for the amendment, teacher Ronbee! ^o^

[RonBee]

Originally Posted by Helped Wanted

Thanks for the amendment, teacher Ronbee! ^o^

You're welcome, and thank you for the name you gave me.

:D