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[Tdol]

) This company did very well in the market bacause it had government back up.

2) A new performance appraisal system was set up in the company .It was an effective system, but no training was given to employees.

May you always get the results you desire in life

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Dear Teacher,
Kindly help me out with the following.


Are these ok?
1)The institute has two campuses. One for the juniors ;One for the seniors.
2) This should not disturb the work life and family life balance.
3) Such a thing is basically done at the corporate level.
4) I want a pen and a pencil
5) I consider you as a friend.If you consider me as a friend, then it would be fantastic.
6) Competition has intensified in the aviation industry.Leading players have got into a price war.Whatever happens, it would be good for the customers.


Thanks a ton.

[JJD]

Hi I'm not native but I will try.

1) The other for the seniors.
5) I consider you as a friend. If you feel the same, it is fantastic.
6) The aviation industry is facing intense competition.
Leading players have started (harsh/tough) price competition, which may be benefitial for (the) consumers.
Perhaps repeeting "competition" isn't beautiful.
I'm not sure about (the).