thesis

i need help on my thesis. For the last month i have been researching abortion among latinas. I came up with a weak thesis but i want to see if i can make it strong. here is my thesis........A latina, who grows up in a enviorment where culture and religion are important in thier lives will not choose to have a abortion more than any other ethnic group.

[RonBee]

Say: "A latina who grows up in a enviorment where culture and religion are important in her life...." You need to rewrite that ethnic group does not refer to a person.