I need help (essay)

[MrHeckles]

Hi everybody,

since I´m not a native speaker I could use some help with my essay for english class.
Its basically finsihed but I need someone to look trough it and maybe suggest better words or correct gramatical mistakes I made.Its just a short one (one page) so if anyone thinks he/she could help and has some time I would be happy :)

Thanks

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[Tdol]

Try posting it, or parts of it here: http://www.usingenglish.com/forum/ed...riting-topics/