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How to improve this letter?
Hi,
How can I improve the following letter:
This has reference to the Door Mat stock we require for Delhi sales. At present, we have no stock of Door Mat # 12 and # 24, while the other two numbers (Door Mat # 16 & # 18) are also not sufficient for this month sales.
Thanks in advance.
Regards.
Sweetie_Sneha
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Re: How to improve this letter?

Originally Posted by
sweetie_sneha Hi,
How can I improve the following letter:
This has reference to the Door Mat stock we require for Delhi sales. At present, we have no stock of Door Mat # 12 and # 24, while the other two numbers (Door Mat # 16 & # 18) are also not sufficient for this month sales.
Thanks in advance.
Regards.
Sweetie_Sneha
"This is with reference to the Door Mat stock we require for sales in Delhi. At present, we have no stocks of Door Mat # 12 and # 24, and our stocks of the other two numbers (Door Mat # 16 & # 18) are insufficient for this month's sales."
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Re: How to improve this letter?
Thanks a lot for the help.
Sweetie_Sneha
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