
18-Jun-2006, 14:38
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Re: How to improve this letter? Quote: |
Originally Posted by sweetie_sneha Hi,
How can I improve the following letter:
This has reference to the Door Mat stock we require for Delhi sales. At present, we have no stock of Door Mat # 12 and # 24, while the other two numbers (Door Mat # 16 & # 18) are also not sufficient for this month sales.
Thanks in advance.
Regards.
Sweetie_Sneha | "This is with reference to the Door Mat stock we require for sales in Delhi. At present, we have no stocks of Door Mat # 12 and # 24, and our stocks of the other two numbers (Door Mat # 16 & # 18) are insufficient for this month's sales." |