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Old 18-Jun-2006, 14:01
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Hi,

How can I improve the following letter:

This has reference to the Door Mat stock we require for Delhi sales. At present, we have no stock of Door Mat # 12 and # 24 , while the other two numbers (Door Mat # 16 & # 18) are also not sufficient for this month sales.

Thanks in advance.

Regards.

Sweetie_Sneha
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