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Hi, this is cover letter, please check me this, this is form me very important, thanks !!

Your practice offer, that I saw in the internet, intrigued me very much, because work in XX is adequate to my education, skills and future career plans.

I am a student of the 4th year of Faculty of Computer Science and Management, Specializations: Financial Management. I am very interested to do practice in this holidays in department of finance in Wroclaw.
After my study I am planning to work in this firm, that's why this practice is for me very important.

I am a responsible person who is concerned with performance and accountability. I have excellent communication skills. I think this practice let mi get new experienced and also You can use my knowledge to realize Yours need.

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that I saw in the internet,- which I saw on the Internet, interested me greatly
work in XX is adequate to my- working in xx would be ideal for me with my education...
am a student of the 4th year of- I am a 4th year student
interested to do practice in this holidays- in a placement this summer in ...
this practice let mi get new experienced- this would enable me to acquire experience
also You can use my knowledge to realize Yours need- my knowledge can be put to your service