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| I was surprised to find my passport which was locked in an old bag. Hope that's a better sentence. |
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| It's called a dangling modifier. I wrote an article a few weeks ago about exactly this kind of error: Dangling, he wrote a modifier. |
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| Quote:
but should "Away" be omitted? I was surprised to find my passport which was locked away in an old bag. |
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| "locked away" sounds better, but "locked" on its own is OK. |
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