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Old 26-Jun-2006, 10:09
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Locked away in an old bag. I was surprise to found my passport.
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I was surprised to find my passport which was locked in an old bag.

Hope that's a better sentence.
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Old 26-Jun-2006, 12:10
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Default Re: what is the grammatical error in the following sentence?

It's called a dangling modifier. I wrote an article a few weeks ago about exactly this kind of error: Dangling, he wrote a modifier.
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I was surprised to find my passport which was locked in an old bag.
Hope that's a better sentence.
Thanks
but should "Away" be omitted?
I was surprised to find my passport which was locked away in an old bag.
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"locked away" sounds better, but "locked" on its own is OK.
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