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    Default Could somebody correct it please?

    Hi,

    Could somebody correct the following sentences, please?

    Further reference to the invoices we requested, please note that we have not yet received the invoices for the following customers. The details are as follows:

    Regards,

    Sweetie

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    Default Re: Could somebody correct it please?

    Quote Originally Posted by sweetie_sneha
    Hi,
    Could somebody correct the following sentences, please?
    Further reference to the invoices we requested, please note that we have not yet received the invoices for the following customers.
    The details are as follows:
    Regards,
    Sweetie

    This is further to the invoices we requested for.Please note that we havent yet received them for the following customers.
    (The details are as follows:) I feel this particular sentence is redundant

    Athikh

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    Default Re: Could somebody correct it please?

    What about?

    Regarding our previous request for invoices, we still have yet to receive invoices for the following customers. The details are as follows:

    All the best.

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    Default Re: Could somebody correct it please?

    Quote Originally Posted by Athikh
    This is further to the invoices we requested for.Please note that we havent yet received them for the following customers.
    (The details are as follows:) I feel this particular sentence is redundant
    Athikh
    Thanks a lot for your help.

    Regards,

    Sweetie

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    Default Re: Could somebody correct it please?

    Quote Originally Posted by Casiopea
    What about?

    Regarding our previous request for invoices, we still have yet to receive invoices for the following customers. The details are as follows:

    All the best.
    Thanks a lot for the help.

    Regards,

    Sweetie.

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