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Old 28-Jun-2006, 07:50
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Default Did I write these sentense correctly?

1.) Non-defining clause
Miriam Yeung, who is a famous singer in HK, is my idol.

2.) Definite article
I think she is the most beautiful woman.

3.) Sub-ordinator
We brought a lot of snack because we afraid we will feel hungry at the night.

4.) Introductory phrase
After we have lunch, we go to watch a movie.
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Old 28-Jun-2006, 11:04
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Default Re: Did I write these sentense correctly?

can anyone help pleases?
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Old 29-Jun-2006, 04:38
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Default Re: Did I write these sentense correctly?

2 This sounds a bit incomplete to me- maybe add 'in the world'.
3 We brought a lot of snacks because we were afraid we would feel hungry during the night.
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