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Default Please check my grammar in this sentence

Please check my grammar in this sentence, and feel free to give suggestions, which make the sentence much more smooth.

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By taking the Business 360, I expect to improve my verbal and nonverbal communication skills, make many new friends, create an excellent resume that I can use in the future, and fulfill the prerequisite requirements for my graduation.
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Default Re: Please check my grammar in this sentence

I wouldn't say 'create an excellent resume' unless you literally mean write it. If you mean add things to it that are impressive, then I'd use 'build'.
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