Grammar review

[blendaboy]

Professors, I´m a photographer and I´m going to update my website, I want to know if my speech's grammar and style are correct. Thank you so much:

New design and massive updates for the site, getting unity between art and
communication some times takes so long but now await for our monthly updates.
New faces and characters embracing the beauty for "Fine Art". "The Show"
updates new shots for Bauhaus, Soul Fly and Peter Murphy, new bands like
Behemot, Focus, In the Nursery, Trey Gunn and Witchery. We didn´t forget the magic moments for Scenic Arts, review it.
In our next update we will have our character of September, could be an actress, a singer or somebody else, I mean the right person.
Share with us your perception sending your comments to link listed below. Thanks to all our friends and followers for their confortably words and suggestions,
The trip and the noise are going on, enjoy.

Am I repeating the terms so much? Thanks Again

[Tdol]

getting unity- I'd use 'creating'
some times- sometimes
await for- wait for, or await (without 'for)
Trey Gunn- is this the guy who plays with King Cromson? If so, he's an artist, not a band
review it.- and have reviewed it
our character of September- for September; could...
perception sending- by sending
confortably words- comforting words

[blendaboy]

Professor tdol, thank you very much for your reviewing, it´s so clear and enough for me, kind regards.

[Tdol]

You're welcome, BlendaBoy