Hello, I need some help!

[fanfanfan]

Dear all, I'm new here. I'm very excited to find this forum. I think i will benifit a lot from here.
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Thanks for your kind reply.

[Mister Micawber]

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I'm afraid they all seem like broken English to me, FFF-- at least, the conversation seems awkward and contrived. It also seems quite rude overall-- someone is soon going to get punched in the nose.

For B, the expression is You should be ashamed of yourself!
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[Avalon]

I agree with Mister Micawber ...I had had a look but it was all a bit confusing so I didn´t know what to say....Did you enjoy reading David Copperfield,Mister Micawber?.I certainly did!

[fanfanfan]

I have to agree with you

I wanted to explain loser is really a bad word and usually we should avoid using it because it hurts others.
As for situations in matches, we can use it but it is still rude and impolite.

I don't think there is grammar mistake about the sentence that "You should feel shame on yourself." The expression itself is weird though. ?

Still, i want to know if there are any mistakes in A's experessions except for impoliteness. Thanks!

[Mister Micawber]

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OK-- here is a revision of A's role:


A: You are very sick. I really mean it-- What a loser!

A: Check your stupid vocabulary-- it's broken English. (However, I don't really understand your original sentence here, FFF)

A: There's still a serious grammar mistake.

A: Loser!

A: I'm dissing A, nobody else.

A: You're a pain...
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PS: Hi, Janina. Yes, I like Dickens very much. And he's good for students, because he is relatively easy to read (in spite of the dated language).
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