Urgent! Please correct any grmmatical mistakes.

[bosun]

Please if you find any mistakes, correct them.

1. Can I say like I expect to see or meet you soon instead of I look forward to meeing you soon in a business letter?

2. If you make an order, we can promise to deliver the products to you within a week of receiving your order.

3. As our customer is urgently in need of these goods,check( which i intedn to say make inquiries) and let me know why the delivery is delayed and lwhen it can be made. Please treat this matter with extreme urgency.

4.I will send you the rest of your order later. or I will send you the remainng items in your order later. ( what is the difference between later or later on or at a later date)

5.It's difficult to meet the date of delivery in this situation

6 I hope we will meet sooner or later.( can i say like this instead of I look forward to meeting you soon in a business letter?)

7.We are most anxious to ensure that we give the customer utmost satisfaction.

8. We look forward to your finding the goods satisfactory.

9.This settlemet of this account has been overdued over one month.

as always, I always appreciat your great assistance!!!!!!!!!!!

[Tdol]

1 I would not
4- At a later date might make more sense- later could me in a few hours
5- It doesn't work well for me- how about 'in these circumstances'
8 Don't like it
9 overdue