please check grammar mistakes!(urgent)

[bosun]

If you find any mistakes, please correct them for me!

1. I assure you that you can access the broadband service after you request for that service.

2. I guarrantee that the new phone service will be launching exactly on 16 August3. I hope you will agree to reduce the rate of premium sufficiently to bring it more into line with the extent of the risk insured under the policy.

[river]

CORRECTIONS:

1. You will have access to broadband internet within 24 (or whatever) hours from the time of your initial request. (YOU CAN ALWAYS PREFACE THIS SENTENCE WITH SOMETHING LIKE: Per company policy, ...)

2. The new telephone service will take effect on August 16.

3. I hope the premium will be adjusted to reflect the extent of risk insured under the policy.