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Old 20-Aug-2006, 01:00
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Cool please check grammar mistakes ( it is very urgent !!!!)

If you find any mistakes, please correct them!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Thanks in advance!!

1.these reports are proved to speak for truth.

2.The shipping documents will be delivered to you and we enclose a 30 days' sight draft as agreed in our earlier correspondence. Please confirm by return that you accept this order.

3.will call at your office one of a weekends
4.It is absolutely necessary that you do nothing until our repairman arrives.

5.We think your inquiry is a little insufficient.

6.Would you please know me little more detailed information with regared to your budget question?

7.William needs to be careful of lating for work

8.you need some help hands in setting up a Web server, just get in touch with me.

9.Would you contact me as soon as possible.

10.You duties will be as outlined at the interview.
11. We note that you have requested basins to be drawn up ten lines.
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Old 20-Aug-2006, 13:09
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Default Re: please check grammar mistakes ( it is very urgent !!!!)

1 These reports have proved to be correct.
3 Subject missing
4 OK, but I'd use 'vital' instead of 'aboslutely necessary'.
6 Would you please give me more detailed information...
7 of being late for work
8If you need...
10 Your duties
11- I am not sure what this esentence means- what are the ten lines?
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Default Re: please check grammar mistakes ( it is very urgent !!!!)

I have still some questions about your reply.

1. please confirm by return that you accept this order. does it sould ok?

2.we will call at your office. Can i use call at instead of visit?

3.we note that you have requested basins to be drawn up in tens. Is that right?
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I have still some questions about your reply.
1. please confirm by return that you accept this order. does it sould ok?
2.we will call at your office. Can i use call at instead of visit?
3.we note that you have requested basins to be drawn up in tens. Is that right?
All are good.
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