correct sentence

[lawyerquang]

Please help me correct this sentence and then tell me whether there any mistake of vocabulary and grammar in it: "China's rapid economic growth in recent years has to a large extent been fuelled by business investment in new factories and other commercial premises, many of them producing low-cost manufactured goods".

thanks in advance,

Quang

[RonBee]

Originally Posted by lawyerquang

Please help me correct this sentence and then tell me whether there any mistake of vocabulary and grammar in it: "China's rapid economic growth in recent years has to a large extent been fuelled by business investment in new factories and other commercial premises, many of them producing low-cost manufactured goods".

Say ventures instead of premises.

~R