
26-Mar-2003, 19:03
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Re: grammar terms& comma confusion Quote: |
Originally Posted by mas94010 1.Is a phrase the same as a dependent clause? | No, it is not. Quote: |
Originally Posted by mas94010 2.How is it that this sentence is grammatically correct?
"One customer in the line spoke out and ranted continuously about the unfair price, the other customers rallying and demanding the same reduction in the cost."
(Found in a grammar book)
Doesn't this sentence need more than a comma? | Unfortunately, the sentence lacks clarity. It is unclear to me what "rallying" is, and "the other customers rallying and demanding the same reduction in the cost" refers to something that is not there. There is no indication that the first customer got a reduction in the cost, so there is no reason for other customers to demand the same reduction in the cost.
No change in punctuation is necessary. Regards,
RonBee
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