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bosun · #1 02-Oct-2006, 07:29

If you find any mistakes, can you correct them for me? Thanks in advance.

1.Thanks for your e-mail and clarification.

2.I believe the only outstanding action is the finalisation of the Delivery Schedule (Annex A) which should happen tomorrow, after which I shall arrange for the Amendment, as attached in your e-mail below, to be signed and sent to you asap.

**Tdol** · #2 03-Oct-2006, 07:43

Looks OK to me

MikeNewYork · #3 03-Oct-2006, 18:00

Quote:

Originally Posted by bosun

If you find any mistakes, can you correct them for me? Thanks in advance.

1.Thanks for your e-mail and clarification.

2.I believe the only outstanding action is the finalisation of the Delivery Schedule (Annex A) which should happen tomorrow, after which I shall arrange for the Amendment, as attached in your e-mail below, to be signed and sent to you asap.

The language seems to be too formal for the "asap" ending. I would spell out the abbreviation.

**Tdol** · #4 04-Oct-2006, 06:09

How about 'without delay'?