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Old 02-Oct-2006, 08:29
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Question business letter.
If you find any mistakes, can you correct them for me? Thanks in advance.

1.Thanks for your e-mail and clarification.

2.I believe the only outstanding action is the finalisation of the Delivery Schedule (Annex A) which should happen tomorrow, after which I shall arrange for the Amendment, as attached in your e-mail below, to be signed and sent to you asap.
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Looks OK to me
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Old 03-Oct-2006, 19:00
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If you find any mistakes, can you correct them for me? Thanks in advance.

1.Thanks for your e-mail and clarification.

2.I believe the only outstanding action is the finalisation of the Delivery Schedule (Annex A) which should happen tomorrow, after which I shall arrange for the Amendment, as attached in your e-mail below, to be signed and sent to you asap.
The language seems to be too formal for the "asap" ending. I would spell out the abbreviation.
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How about 'without delay'?
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