please check grammar mistakes.

[bosun]

If you find any mistakes, please correct them for me. THANK YOU!!!

1.Please, let me introduce myself. ( Is it ok in the business letter?)My name is XX and I work for scfirstbank in New york branch

2.I get in touch with you at the recommendation of XX working with you

3. As a PB, I am primarily responsible for providing investment consulting advice.

4. As we have a limited inventory of this item, we suggest you place an order immediately.

5.As our customer is urgently in need of these goods, we must ask you to make inquires and let us know enquiries and let us know why the delay has occurred.

[Tdol]

1 I wouldn't do it.
2 I would start with this, and then give your position (your name is at the foot of the letter) and change it to - XXX, who works with you, recomended that I get in touch with you. I work for...
4 As we..., ordering soon is advisable.
5 let us know enquiries and let us know why the delay has occurred - and let us know why the delay has occurred