
10-Oct-2006, 18:00
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Re: in spite of time shortage or in spite of the shortage of time? Quote:
Originally Posted by bosun Hello!
I am not sure which one sounds better between in spite of time shortage and in spite of the shortage of time. Or do you have any other suggestions? Also, if you find any mistakes, could you please correct them?
1. I really appreciate your help in arranging tickets and ( the ?)accommodation in spite of the shortage of time. ( in spite of time shortage)
2. I am mainly responsible for the CSR part and I know through the personnel a correspondence course paper. | 1. I prefer your phraseology to the other. You might consider using "despite" to save words: "despite the shortage of time".
2. I'm not sure what you are trying to say here. |