Hi,
This should be the last correction for today:
"A MNelson Consultores e Investidores Associados, intends to understand its client’s wishes with a macro view, and so to offer solutions that could its position, line up its public to the market and increase it’s profits."
Thank you
Associados,- no comma
intends - aims
could its position- verb missing
line up its public- not sure what you mean by line up
it’s- its