follow up sales?

[bosun]

Does the following sentences sound ok?
My responsibilities include: Managing a team of six programmers ;designing software architectures; generating follow-up PLC sales.(is it ok?)

[mykwyner]

The sentence is fine. Use commas instead of semi-colons to separate the items, and insert the word and before the word gererating.

[MikeNewYork]

Originally Posted by bosun

Does the following sentences sound ok?
My responsibilities include: Managing a team of six programmers ;designing software architectures; generating follow-up PLC sales.(is it ok?)

I would use "architecture" in the singular.