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follow up sales?
Does the following sentences sound ok?
My responsibilities include: Managing a team of six programmers ;designing software architectures; generating follow-up PLC sales.(is it ok?)
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Re: follow up sales?
The sentence is fine. Use commas instead of semi-colons to separate the items, and insert the word and before the word gererating.
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Re: follow up sales?

Originally Posted by
bosun
Does the following sentences sound ok?
My responsibilities include: Managing a team of six programmers ;designing software architectures; generating follow-up PLC sales.(is it ok?)
I would use "architecture" in the singular.
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