could anyone help me

[abdalhadi]

Dear teacher ,
How are you?
When I'll have an interview how can I introduce my self.
I'm Abdalhadi, I'm 26 years old, I'm Libyan.I live in Alshati, a town in the south of Libya. I'm a petroleum engineer . I graduted from Altahdy University In 2002.My project title ( a new oil field development economics).
I have study many English courses and I passed PET exam In November 2005.I took small idea about computer skills. I don't have any experience, because I've never worked for any company before.
Is It ok or not?

[MikeNewYork]

Dear teacher ,
How are you?
When I'll have an interview how can I introduce my self.
I'm Abdalhadi, I'm 26 years old, I'm Libyan.I live in Alshati, a town in the south of Libya. I'm a petroleum engineer . I graduted from Altahdy University In 2002.My project title ( a new oil field development economics).
I have study many English courses and I passed PET exam In November 2005.I took small idea about computer skills. I don't have any experience, because I've never worked for any company before.
Is It ok or not?

Try to vary your language. Beginning too many short sentences with I is boring and it sounds very child-like.

My name is Abdalhadi. I am a 26-year-old Libyan from Alshati, a town in the south of Libya. In 2002, I was graduated from Althady University with a degree in petroleum engineering. The title of my university projeact was "New Oil Field Development Economics" [or The Economics of New Oil Field Development"]. I don't have any practical working experience yet, but I have studied English for years, have passed the PET examination last November, and have taken some computer courses. I would very much like to work for your company because....